Microcuento: I SEE DEAD PEOPLE

Posted on July 22, 2013 by edwincolonpagan
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Imagen del film The Sixth Sense

Desde pequeño veo a los muertos. Así que no les tengo miedo pues el espíritu de abuela me arrulló y cantó canciones de cuna cuando mi mamá me abandonó al año de nacido para irse con un rufián. Ellos nunca me molestan, todo lo contrario. Nos ayudamos mutuamente.

Algunos fantasmas no tienen idea de que están muertos. El hacerles creer que están vivos para no amargarle la muerte me causa mucha tristeza.

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Autor del libro "Mi Peor Enemigo Soy Yo". Pintor, cuentista, planificador profesional, profesor universitario y motivador. 101% Puertorriqueño.
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14 Responses to Microcuento: I SEE DEAD PEOPLE

  1. Rotze Mardini's avatar Rotze Mardini says:
    July 22, 2013 at 11:02 pm

    Escalofriante.
    Me gustó mucho.
    Un fuerte abrazo.

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  2. rubengarcia's avatar rubengarcia says:
    July 22, 2013 at 11:27 pm

    Está exclente buen final, que pienso que es allí donde esta el núcleo de la mini… un abrazo
    http://www.senddero.wordpress.com

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  3. Theresa's avatar Theresa says:
    July 23, 2013 at 11:27 am

    Is this from the movie “The Sixth Sense,” an essay of yours or the truth about yourself?

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    • edwincolonpagan's avatar edwincolonpagan says:
      July 23, 2013 at 11:51 am

      In the develop of a micro story the writer uses references, in order to give keys to the reader to understand the plot of the story. In this case I used the film “The Sixth Sense” to narrate a fantastic story of a child, that in spite to be abandoned by his mother, he uses his skills to be free and happy talking with to dead people. And also he try to keep the dead people happy too, especially to whom that don’t know that they are really dead. Thanks for your support my lady to my mini stories. A big hug from my island!!

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  4. Mél@nie's avatar melanie says:
    July 24, 2013 at 6:05 am

    “film-culte” as we say in French… 🙂 A quite different role for Bruce Willis with a formidable young partner Haley Joel Osment and talented Aussie Toni Colette…
    – – –
    Hot greetings(33°C!) from Toulouse, Francia, my very best y muchas gracias por your stop-over(s) at the new playground… Hasta luego, amigo! 🙂

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  5. Victoria Eugenia's avatar Victoria Eugenia says:
    July 24, 2013 at 7:46 pm

    Pobre, chiquillo; se tuvo que conformar con el arrullo de su abuela fallecida. ¡Muy bueno!

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  6. Stark's avatar Stark says:
    July 28, 2013 at 5:33 pm

    Que bueno!! El post y el blog, enhorabuena.

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